I find myself...

[Fliptastic29]

Uninhibited coitus melts its way into my mind,
such that,
I find myself...
Completely,
Immersed in the notion of this free-lanced way of life.

Everyday the sun rises,
Everyday I look down,
I see a depression,
I see deprivation.

Sagging Untouched,
unwanted...unloved,
Piece of me.

[Hannibal]

I like that.
Let the good times roll...

[Hannibal]

Penis.

[machinery]

very simple and true...

but i find some of the word choice forced

coitus...bah!

what man, if he is untouched, has the word coitus on his mind? why not fucking? or romping or something vulgar? see what i'm saying...

also, how does it melt?
it seems to me that it wouldn't leave yr mind...and more, it would invade your brain, not melt into it

one more thing: the bold isn't doing it for me.

i've always been a fan of the italics ....
it seems more subtle...

chew on that you sex craving, beavered blue balled, depraved man of nature...

just kidding...it happens.

yo vivo con mi novia, pero sin embargo soy cachondo.

[Fliptastic29]

My teacher used the word coitus, and it struck me that i have never used that word in writing. So i felt the need to use it [img]smile.gif[/img] But i totally see your point with the melting. Doesn't really go well. And yes i yearn for a females touch. It's been like 3 or 4 months now. Of course when i was dating a girl i went through some periods like that also. So i ask, which one is better?

[Hannibal]

Hey at least your gf didn't get drunk and piss herself all over your couch...
Like your last 'coital partner'

[Hannibal]

Hey at least your gf didn't get drunk and piss herself all over your couch...
Like your last 'coital partner'

[Fliptastic29]

Hahahaha. That's hilarious. Yea can you believe she actually called me. What a riot. I'm just lucky she didn't pee on me during a coitus event [img]smile.gif[/img]

[Hannibal]

You're not into that? hm... here I thought you were.